Diary of a Debut: What happened to IHWSH and The D Word? And 5 Self Pub Do’s and Don’ts.

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As you may have noticed, we are pretty much still jumping up and down about selling The Toast to Atria late last year-We can’t WAIT until early 2014 when it comes out.  But, for those of you that have been with us since the beginning, you may be wondering, what the hell happened to our first two books,  I’ll Have Who She’s Having and The D Word?

The answer is complicated.

While we love our first two novels, we made the decision to shelve them.  Many of you that have followed our VERY LONG writing journey know that traditional publishing was always the goal for us. (Thank you, btw, for listening to us bitch about it for the past four years!)

We queried both IHWSH and The D Word long and hard, enduring more rejection letters than we care to admit.  Like so many manuscripts, they just weren’t the right book at the right time that made in front of the right person. And let’s face it, there’s always a fair amount of luck involved too!

So we grudgingly made the choice to self publish them after trying in vain to get an agent. And the books did….okay.  Mostly well reviewed but not as much traction as we would like for the financial investment we had put into them. (We’ll get to what we think we did wrong later so you can learn from our mistakes…) It was then we decided to write another manuscript and we made an agreement it was traditional publishing or BUST, damnit!

We aren’t dogging self publishing at all.  It takes incredible drive and talent to be successful when self pubbing your novel and there are some AWESOME authors out there. (Dina Silver and Dee Detarsio come to mind.) Many have done so well both critically and financially that they’ve been picked up by traditional houses, like Jamie McGuire, Jessica Park, and of course, EL James.  But for us, we wanted it old school.

So, for now, IHWSH and The D Word are resting comfortably on Liz’s hard drive.  We hope one day they’ll see the light of day again(especially IHWSH—it’s campy and fun and inappropriate and we love it!)  But we’re honest enough with ourselves to know that they would both probably need some TLC to be traditionally published—our writing had definitely grown with each book and we’ve had to learn from the many writing mistakes (so much overwriting! Too many super long flashbacks!  Telling, not showing!) we made in the first two to get where we are today.

We hope y’all understand. From our experience, neither the self or traditional publication paths are perfect, but you just have the make the best choices for yourself and hope they work out. xo

Are you thinking about self pubbing?  We’ve put together a list of Do and Don’ts.  And we’d love to hear what you think too!

Liz & Lisa’s top 5 Self Pub Do’s and Don’ts (aka all the ways we effed up when we did it.)

1. DON’T forget to edit, and then edit some more, and then hire someone to edit your manuscript.

From both an author and book blogger viewpoint, this is the BIGGEST problem we see.  We had both IHWSH and The D Word manuscripts professionally edited but there were STILL embarrassing typos.  It doesn’t mean the editor didn’t do a great job, but we’re dealing with humans and it’s nearly impossible to make it perfect.  But typos are distracting to the reader and make you look unprofessional, so just edit the shit out your ms and then go back and edit some more. And then hire someone to edit it before you hit the publish button on Amazon.

For those of you querying agents and publishers: Consider sending the ms out for a grammar and developmental edit before hitting the query circuit.  Not only will your manuscript look great, they can help you fix plot holes or inconsistencies in the story.  We hired Emily Heckman to edit The Toast, and her notes were INCREDIBLY helpful–worth every penny!

2. Choose your early readers wisely

Make sure to choose people that will give thoughtful, honest feedback.  It’s really great to have your girlfriends read your manuscript, but if all they’re going to say is “I LOVE it!!!” without any specific notes, it really doesn’t do much except inflate your ego. Choose people that are hugely supportive(no haters please!) that will take the time to think through your plot points and have the balls to tell you that your heroine is actually a heinous, unlikable bitch. (Happened to us with IHWSH! And they were right!)

It may sting a bit, but good, honest feedback can make or break your book.  We let everyone in the world read our first two and then had to decide which feedback to incorporate–it ended up pulling us into a lot of different directions.  While writing The Toast, we chose only three people who we felt would provide fantastic, critical notes.  And you know what?  Those notes SAVED the book.  True story.

3. Write an AWESOME pitch

Okay, let us put our book blogger hats on for a minute: PLEASE write a great pitch.  PLEASE include all the links.  PLEASE research the sites before you send a personalized pitch to them. PLEASE check out this post. Your book is never going to get off the ground with great word of mouth, so make sure to get it in from of the right people.

Having trouble writing something short but sweet??  Your story might be too complicated.  We’ve started writing the pitch before the book, just to make sure we’ve got a concept we could pitch it in thirty seconds in a elevator, if need be. (You never know when that might come in handy!)

4. Become a social media whore.

Get your mind out of the gutter!  We don’t mean you should write back those strange foreign men that send Facebook messages asking if they can make friendship with you.  We’re just saying you need to devote some time each day to promoting yourself online and building a following. And don’t forget–it’s not just about Facebook and Twitter anymore.  Now you’ve got to give Instagram, PinterestGoodreads and many other sites some lovin’ too.

5. Don’t get discouraged!

Not gonna lie-we got discouraged and wallowed in some really good wine over the fact that we didn’t become eBook millionaires overnight.  And it probably affected the effort we put into promoting our books and the end results we saw.  So remember to be realistic when making goals and don’t give up–it takes time for the word to spread!  Just keep the faith in your book, and yourself.  And hey-when you become the next EL James, just don’t forget about us!

 

 

 

 

 

XOXO, Liz & Lisa

13 Responses to “Diary of a Debut: What happened to IHWSH and The D Word? And 5 Self Pub Do’s and Don’ts.”

  1. Jencey Gortney

    Liz and Lisa,
    Ladies this is some great advice! I am sorry that I missed your first novels. I look forward to The Toast. I agree from blogger perspective what you said about pitch and researching what you send out to others. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    Jencey

  2. Liz

    Jencey, Thanks! and I know, right? Sometimes the pitches we get are….lackluster….to say the least. It always surprises me when they don’t put the pitch in the email? Just a link to click on? So odd! xo

  3. Dee DeTarsio

    Dear Liz and Lisa!
    Thanks for such an honest, vulnerable post to help put all the craziness into perspective! (When the green-eyed monster rears its ugly head, I invite him in for a cup of shut-the-eff-up and then I go play with fiction!) Long live Chick Lit! xo

  4. ShawneeB

    Heeeellloo Ladies-I have a 7yr old daughter who wants to be an author. I will share w/her what you have advised. She will be thrilled! Thank you! She loved “The Street” birthday for Harper and would totally enjoy meeting you gals one day. Thank You Both for all the goodies whether its a freebie or amazing advice. I bow to you…if one of my little ones wants to worship a pair of freakin awesome authors who just so happen to be a pair of rocking ladies…I’ll encourage her. Thank You for Everything!

  5. Lisa Harris

    I came across my copy of IHWSH just the other day! Writing is so hard and I give up on it every day…lol. Then I start again every day. I have really enjoyed being able to ride along on your journey because I find so much encouragement. Really looking forward to The Toast.

  6. Amber

    Great advice! I currently have a novel on Kindle and while I would love to have become rich off it, it’s so not the case. I hope I get a book published the old fashioned way some day like you guys!

  7. Stephanie Elliot

    Mine never posted? I had some great things to say! What happened? Mostly I was thanking you girls for putting everything out there for us! Let’s see if this one posts!

  8. Stephanie Elliot

    CRAP! why didn’t my first comment a few days ago go up?? Anyway, now I know it works! This is my favorite section of your blog and I so appreciate you guys sharing this experience — You have NO IDEA! (And I’m still royally bummed that my comment didn’t post.) OH WELL! :)

  9. Liz

    Shawnee, Awww…she sounds so cute and I love that she wants to be an author! Come meet us when we go on book tour with The Toast! xoxo

  10. Liz

    Lisa, You HAVE been here since the beginning and we so appreciate you! xoxo

  11. Liz

    Amber, We loved The Swimmer’s Assistant–I hope it takes off like crazy! xoxo

  12. Liz

    Steph! You are always so sweet and supportive and we heart you to pieces! xoxoxo

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